中考满分英语作文赏析

【写作要求】

假设你叫李华，你们市将要举行以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”为题的演讲比赛，请你准备写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：

1.说明此次演讲的主题(how to eat in a healthy way)。

2.我们应该少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些，并说明原因。

3.描述自己的健康饮食习惯，并举例说明。

4.希望大家都有个好的饮食习惯。

作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。

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How to Eat in a Healthy Way

Hello, everybody. I'm Li Hua.Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way.

Firstly, we should never eat fried food or foods with lots of sugar because they are not good for health.Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit.Because they can make us become much healthier.

My eating habits are good.For example, I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.

I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way.

 

【写作要求】

作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把，一是字母，二是数字，三是音符。”从这句话中，我们足可见音乐对人的发展的影响。请你根据以下提示，以Music为题，写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。

提示：1. 音乐使人充满活力，让人快乐；

2. 没有音乐，生活就没有乐趣；

3. 你最喜欢的音乐是......

4. 你不能忍受的音乐是......

要求：1. 80词左右；

2. 恰当运用定语从句。

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Music

I like music very much. It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. Music is very important in our life. If there is no music, our life won’t be so interesting. Different people like different kinds of music. I like electronic music that’s loud. It makes me excited. I also like music that I can dance to. The Cool Kids is my favorite band. I can’t stand music that is quiet and slow. It makes me sleepy.

 

【写作要求】

为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well？”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。（以上背景内容无需表述）

短文要点如下：

1.学生应该守时、守信、不撒谎、不说脏话；

2.礼貌待人，热心助人；

3.遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗；不乱扔垃圾；

4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。

要求：1.不要逐词翻译。

2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。

3.词数60~80。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。

How to behave well?

Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.

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How to behave well?

Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.

As a student，I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. We’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.

Finally，learn to work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.

 

【写作要求】

请根据以下提示信息以My favourite movie star为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，可适当发挥。

提示信息：

☆ Who is your favourite movie star?

☆ What does he or she look like?

☆ What do you think is his or her best movie?

☆ Why do you like him or her?

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My favourite movie star

My favourite movie star is Jackie Chan. He has won many prizes. He is famous not only in China, but also in other countries.

Jackie Chan is not very tall. He has black hair and a big nose. His eyes are not big, but bright. He always smiles, especially after he beats bad men. Most of his movies are exciting. I think his best movie is Police Story. He often gives money to help poor people, so I like him very much.

 

【写作要求】

天下最伟大的爱就是母爱。假设你是李静，母亲节就要到了，你们班将举办以What will you do for Mum?为题的英语演讲比赛。请你准备一篇80词左右的演讲稿参加比赛。

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What will you do for Mum?

Hello, class. I’m Li Jing. Mother’s Day is coming.

I’m going to do something for my mum on that day.

My mum likes flowers, so I’ll buy some beautiful ones for her. I’ll cook a delicious dinner after school. Our family will get together and have dinner happily. Also, I’ll send my mum a card and say “Happy Mother’s Day” to her.

I love my mum very much and I’ll study hard to make her proud of me one day.

Thanks for your attention.

 

【写作要求】

亲爱的同学们，课余时间、周末、假期，你们通常都是怎样度过的呢？请以“My Free Time”为题，写一篇短文。

信息提示：1. 参加运动，强身健体；2. 娱乐活动，放松心情；3. 做家务，帮助父母；

4. 课外阅读，开拓视野。

要点：1. 根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译。

2. 文中不得出现真实人名或校名。

3. 词数为80-100。文章的开头已给出，但不计人总词数。

My Free Time

I have lots of things to do in my free time. _____________

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My Free Time

I have lots of things to do in my free time.

Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too. When I get tired, I would like to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel, a science fiction, or even a poem. Reading calms my heart down and satisfies my hunger for knowledge.

I love my free time because I enjoy the freedom.

 

【写作要求】

每一个人,每一个国家，都拥有梦想。“中国梦”是目前最热的话题。作为中学生，你是如何理解中国梦的？你的中国梦是什么呢？为实现你的梦想，你将怎么做呢？假设你叫李红（Li Hong）,请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。

要求： 1. 条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。

2. 书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。

3. 短文中应尽量包括提示内容，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。

4. 参考词汇：China dream，come true ,achieve one’s dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of

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My Dream

Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, and they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams.

My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up , I must get it over .

I’m sure it’s very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.

 

【写作要求】

当今社会，与人交往越来越成为一种不可或缺的能力，作为中学生，学会如何与人相处尤为重要。假如上周你们班对“如何与人相处”展开了讨论，“How to get on well with others?”为题，写一篇英语短文。

注意：

(1)词数80左右；

(2)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

(3)文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。

【优秀满分范文】

How to get on well with others?

As we all know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways?

First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.

In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy.

 

【写作要求】

在不同的地方有不同的风俗习惯，饮食文化很重要。中国的饮食文化不同于西方。请你谈谈中国的三餐，以“when you in China, do as the Chinese do!” 为题写一篇短文。

要求：80词左右，内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯；书写规范。

【优秀满分范文】

When in China, do as the Chinese do!

Meals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West．

In China, lunch is usually served around 12 o’clock．As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the West．Chopsticks are used to eat most food．Generally, for dinner, there’ll be lots of different dishes, not just three courses．Besides, Chinese people like to talk about food, so it’s a good topic during a meal．

The golden rule is: when you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!

 

【写作要求】

养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯，对于我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数90左右的短文，发表在学校网站上。

提示要点：

（一）良好的生活和学习习惯包括：

1）在生活方面：①健康饮食 ②经常锻炼 ③利用好时间

2）在学习方面：①课前预习 ②认真听讲 ③独立作业

（二）良好习惯带来的益处包括

1）帮助我们更好的学习知识

2）使我们提高技能，学会自我控制。

（三） 谈谈你的感受

作文要求：

1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数90左右，开关已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing．

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A Good Habit, a Successful School Life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing．

In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet．Also, it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot．And we should learn to make good use of our time．In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson．In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully．Besides, it’s important for us to do our homework on our own．

In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills．We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits．

I think good habits are really good for our mind and body．

 

【写作要求】

学会分享很重要。你有哪些东西要分享?可采取哪些方式分享?请根据图示内容，结合自身的一次经历，写一篇短文，并阐述分享的意义。

要求：

1．要点齐全，并适当发挥；

2．词数：80词左右(开头已给出、不计人总词数)；

3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Sharing

It’s very important to learn to share with each other．

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Sharing

It’s very important to learn to share with each other.

I have many things to share in different ways．For example，I can share some beautiful pictures，favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQ．e-mail which are widely used. Now I’d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you．

Emily was lonely and unhappy．I hoped to cheer her up．So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after class．As time went by，she became used to sharing her feelings with me．Now we’re good friends．

In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up．We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more．

 

【写作要求】

近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国的传统文化正越来越受到各国朋友的关注。请根据提示，以“The Spring Festival”为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍我国的春节。

要求：1、字迹工整，规范；

2、 80词左右；

3、根据所给要点及参考词汇，可适当发挥。

①春节是中国农历年（the lunar year）的第一天；

②春节前：一个月前开始准备（prepare）食物，打扫卫生，装饰（decorate）房子；

③除夕（On Chinese New Year’s Eve）：家人团员（get together）, 吃年夜饭（big dinner）,守夜（stay up till midnight）, 放烟花鞭炮（play fireworks and crackers）；

④大年初一（the first day）：穿新衣（put on new clothes），向父母拜年（greet parents），收压岁钱（get lucky money）

【优秀满分范文】

The Spring Festival

In China, the Spring festival is the first day of the lunar year. People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food, and clean and decorate their homes. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, the family all get together for a big dinner. They stay up till midnight, and then play fireworks and crackers for good luck. On the first day of the lunar New Year, children put on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to get lucky money from them.

 

【写作要求】

假如你是李华,是一名初中生。随着科技的发展,iPad已成为中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐,阅读纯文本电子书,又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一篇短文,谈谈中学生使用iPad的利弊。短文内容必须包括以下几点:

1. 使用iPad对学习的好处;

2. 对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响;

3. 提出自己的建议并说明理由。

注意:开头已经给出,不计入总数。词数100字左右。

Is iPad Good or Bad for Middle School Students?

I’m a junior middle school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and they think it’s a fashion to use them.

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Is iPad good or bad for middle school students?

I’m a junior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and they think it’s a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, it’s helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.

Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.

In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.

 

【写作要求】

三年的初中生活即将结束,静坐在考场中的你,一定会思绪万千。三年来,你在学习、生活等方面取得了优异的成绩,这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励,还有……现在想来你很感谢他们。请以“Thank you,my...”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求如下:1. 短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等;

2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;

3. 词数80左右。

【优秀满分范文1】

Thank you,My English teacher

I should say “thank you”to my English teacher.

He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.I think he is the best in my mind.

I will remember him forever.

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Thank You,My Mother

Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother.

I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world. She is the busiest one in my family. She does chores for the family and cares about my study. She has taught me a lot. She does lots of things for me,but she never wants anything in return.

How will I show my thanks to my mother? First,this year,I am going to give her a surprise birthday party and buy her a special present. Second,I’ll do well in school. Third,I’ll help her do housework when I’m free. I want to make her happy.

In a word,I love my mother.

 

【写作要求】

假设某中学生英文报开展关于计算机与学生生活的征文活动，请你根据下表所提示的要点，以Computer in my life为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述计算机在你生活中的用途，并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。

1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数100左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。

Computer in my life

The computer has become an important part of my life.

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Computer in my life

The computer has become an important part of my life.

Usually I use the computer to search for information and do some further reading. With the help of computer，I can get more knowledge easily in my free time. I not only communicate with my teachers and classmates by email，but also discuss questions with them online. What’s more，I can enjoy the music online and shopping on the Internet makes my life much easier. Sometimes CD-ROMs help me learn English and make me relaxed. Moreover，I can take part in some kinds of activities online.

In a word，the computer is really of great help to me. It brings me a more meaningful and colourful life.