春天来了 Spring comes

Spring comes,some people can do what they want to do.Look at the lake,the ducks swim in there.ther are laughing.I know they are very happy.Look at the trees,begin to turn green.Lot of pepole is working hard.And everywhere are so warm.Look at the sky,swallow is flying.They are　Freedom.A year moment lies in spring,and Spring is very beautiful.So, I love Spring very much.How about you?

译文：
春天来了，有些人可以做他们想做的事情。看湖上，鸭子正在那游。他们在笑，我知道他们非常快乐。看树，开始变绿。很多人正在工作努力。到处都是温暖的。看看天空，燕子在飞。他们是自由的。。一年之际在于春，春天是很美丽的。所以，我很喜欢春天。你呢？